Wednesday, July 14, 2010

Masked Identity


vulgar thoughts

hidden by

a gentle face

mistakenly

praised

for feigned

innocence

12 comments:

  1. Characters that profess innocence can be so dangerous! Beautifully expressed!

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  2. Its an age-old phenomenon... the bad disguised as the good... thanx =)

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  3. The wolf in sheep's clothing. Your poem is a well crafted warning. Nicely done.

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  4. Thoughts are they only part of us we can throughly hide from world.

    -Tim

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  5. gives me a shiver, I've never been a very good judge of people.

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  6. Simple... holds a wealth of meaning. Very well done.

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  7. you take my breath away! ouch

    http://bit.ly/9JWQ0M

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  8. I think the truth in this is its beauty.

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  9. a very good writeup...

    Yours Frendly,
    Saravana Kumar M
    Few Miles

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  10. Wonderful job tying the words together in a statement of such truth.

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  11. So true! Great job- weaving words to give such a powerful massage.

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  12. So true. The pretense of innocence can be a dangerous weapon.
    http://honor-and-truth.blogspot.com

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