I don't wanna live like this
I just wanna let you know;
That everything I hold on
Is everything I can't let go.
An interesting combination of the prompt words and very well done.
Interesting way to put it..like an automata
yes.. a very interestign take.. loved the image too..
Very intense... and I wonder what that one word means, the long "A" one... hmmmmm.... This week's 3WW: To See
Very nicely put!
wow. this is a very strong poem & thevocab. is seductive.
I love this. The prompt words very creatively used.
'emotional massacre' Brilliant....bloody brilliant.http://radio-nowhere.org/nb/?p=456
Thanks for visiting and appreciating my work...@ Julie: abyssopelagic is one of the deepest zones in the ocean.
Oh, I love the word abyssopelagic. A lovely job with this poem.