I don't wanna live like this
I just wanna let you know;
That everything I hold on
Is everything I can't let go.
Wednesday, July 21, 2010
Fishing To Kill
I jump upwards from my abyssopelagic habitat to swallow the magnetic bait offered by your alluring eyes just to be added to a line of victims of your emotional massacre.
An interesting combination of the prompt words and very well done.
ReplyDeleteInteresting way to put it..
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yes.. a very interestign take.. loved the image too..
ReplyDeleteVery intense... and I wonder what that one word means, the long "A" one...
ReplyDeletehmmmmm....
This week's 3WW: To See
Very nicely put!
ReplyDeletewow. this is a very strong poem & the
ReplyDeletevocab. is seductive.
I love this. The prompt words very creatively used.
ReplyDelete'emotional massacre' Brilliant....bloody brilliant.
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ReplyDelete@ Julie: abyssopelagic is one of the deepest zones in the ocean.
Oh, I love the word abyssopelagic. A lovely job with this poem.
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