Wednesday, July 21, 2010

Fishing To Kill


I jump upwards
from my
abyssopelagic habitat
to swallow
the magnetic bait
offered by
your alluring eyes
just to be added
to a line of victims
of your emotional massacre.

10 comments:

  1. An interesting combination of the prompt words and very well done.

    ReplyDelete
  2. yes.. a very interestign take.. loved the image too..

    ReplyDelete
  3. Very intense... and I wonder what that one word means, the long "A" one...

    hmmmmm....

    This week's 3WW: To See

    ReplyDelete
  4. wow. this is a very strong poem & the
    vocab. is seductive.

    ReplyDelete
  5. I love this. The prompt words very creatively used.

    ReplyDelete
  6. 'emotional massacre' Brilliant....bloody brilliant.

    http://radio-nowhere.org/nb/?p=456

    ReplyDelete
  7. Thanks for visiting and appreciating my work...
    @ Julie: abyssopelagic is one of the deepest zones in the ocean.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Oh, I love the word abyssopelagic. A lovely job with this poem.

    ReplyDelete

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...