hi Mia, lovely thoughts.. a good flavor to this tercet(3 line poem).
a haiku doesn't have more than 17 syllables i think, urs is exceeding. i'm a novice at the form myself :) but thats a common point wherever i've read of haiku. 3 lines, maximum of 17 syllables.
hi Mia, lovely thoughts.. a good flavor to this tercet(3 line poem).
ReplyDeletea haiku doesn't have more than 17 syllables i think, urs is exceeding. i'm a novice at the form myself :) but thats a common point wherever i've read of haiku. 3 lines, maximum of 17 syllables.
yeah.. my bad.. this one has 18... Im still working on this form... this one is after all my second haiku... thanks for the input..
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