Wednesday, August 18, 2010


He stumbled, fell and phased out. And the grimace held even in unconsciousness, even though you'd expect the muscles to relax. The alcohol coursed freely in his veins, poisoning blood and his already poisoned existence. The belt in his hand lay like a snake slithering to kill it's own master. His wife regained her senses and ordered herself under control. And then she wiped her bloody lip and dialed 911.


  1. lots going on here that is unsaid, but realized. Neat.

  2. This was potent and you know why? Because I found myself saying at the end, "too bad she didn't strangle him with the belt." So, yeah, you captured it well.....


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