Wednesday, August 25, 2010

The Angel

Her halo shines and glistens.
But her prayers they go unlistened.
She does His bidding,
abstains from sins.
And hopes someday He'll listen.
Posted by Maryam at 4:45 AM
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19 comments:

  1. Shail25 August, 2010 05:13

    Lovely.

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  2. Anonymous25 August, 2010 07:03

    Awesome..

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  3. Jay R. Thurston25 August, 2010 10:20

    Clever limerick, I enjoyed it!

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  4. anthonynorth25 August, 2010 10:29

    Nicely done.

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  5. Vinay Leo R.25 August, 2010 10:30

    very nice.. poignant limerick..!

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  6. Sidrah25 August, 2010 11:11

    don't lose hope, have faith =)

    beautifully written ^^

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  7. Coraline J. Thompson25 August, 2010 14:28

    short and sweet with a great use of prompts. Well done, I always enjoy reading something that packs a powerful punch.

    The World of Lost Souls

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  8. Toi25 August, 2010 14:55

    beautiful...patience is hard, for me but i've
    found that often He is gently moving situations
    and people for our good and theirs.

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  9. K25 August, 2010 15:40

    what a witty and bright little diddy.

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  10. Unknown25 August, 2010 19:52

    Oooo, lovely and packs a punch. Great combination.

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  11. Angel25 August, 2010 20:36

    Nice read.

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  12. Maryam25 August, 2010 20:41

    Thank you all for the lovely comments!

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  13. Dreamer25 August, 2010 23:28

    Agreed with Toi. Beautiful piece Mia!

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  14. Ramesh Sood26 August, 2010 04:19

    Yes, he will, only thing he is never in a hurry...

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  15. Dreamer26 August, 2010 23:08

    Never in a hurry. =) thats profound.

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  16. Maryam26 August, 2010 23:25

    Yes I agree =)

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  17. gautami tripathy27 August, 2010 09:22

    Hope he does..

    reaching out

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  18. Lanie29 August, 2010 21:18

    i love this!

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  19. Divaa Divine01 September, 2010 01:47

    inshallah he will :)

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