Wednesday, August 25, 2010

The Angel

Her halo shines and glistens.
But her prayers they go unlistened.
She does His bidding,
abstains from sins.
And hopes someday He'll listen.

20 comments:

  1. Clever limerick, I enjoyed it!

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  2. very nice.. poignant limerick..!

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  3. don't lose hope, have faith =)

    beautifully written ^^

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  4. short and sweet with a great use of prompts. Well done, I always enjoy reading something that packs a powerful punch.

    The World of Lost Souls

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  5. beautiful...patience is hard, for me but i've
    found that often He is gently moving situations
    and people for our good and theirs.

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  6. what a witty and bright little diddy.

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  7. Oooo, lovely and packs a punch. Great combination.

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  8. Thank you all for the lovely comments!

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  9. Agreed with Toi. Beautiful piece Mia!

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  10. Yes, he will, only thing he is never in a hurry...

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  11. Never in a hurry. =) thats profound.

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