Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Surface Tension


Negativity hangs
like a cloud
enshrouding body
and soul.
Needing
just a ray
to break
the surface tension.

22 comments:

  1. I liked this one. Quite a visual piece.

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  2. Great comparison... negativity can certainly linger unwantedly like a cloud.

    Enjoyed this one, excellent!

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  3. i already like your style ! short and perfect :)

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  4. This is indeed interesting..well done..

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  5. So true Mia.

    http://sychh.blogspot.com/

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  6. Well done! The image and the words gel together perfectly.

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  7. They say every darkest sky has a silver lining. Just search for it and all negativity is burned to ashes. :)

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  8. so true, just that one ray of warm positivity
    will dilute negativity.

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  9. This is an honest to goodness reality! Loved it!

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  10. Aren't you both just adorable?
    I loved this one <3

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  11. Hey Salman is back! About time =P And thanks =)

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  12. I din't know my arrival will make people so happy :)

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  13. @Salman,
    Who both?
    So glad you're back. =)

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  14. You both. Mia and Khadeeja you.

    Thanks for showing me that people missed me.
    I was just a bit depressed. http://www.salmansaeed.info/2010/09/silence.html

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